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How Do You Know?

Pretend with me for a moment. Let’s pretend you are a struggling writer, trying to complete a novel you really like. You’ve given your tome to an editor, who slowly gives you back comments. For the most part, they are

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From Hard as Roxx – “What Could Go Wrong?”

This is a brief excerpt from Chapter 2 of my science fiction tome, Hard as Roxx. I am looking for a proofreader to edit chapters 12 – 27 . In the meantime, here is one of my favorite moments, from Chapter 2.

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Grammar Minute: Avoiding a Comma Coma

This post will require more than a minute (or one post), but I think it’s worth it, because commas are so seldom used correctly. I overuse commas. I know the rules; however, sometime over my lifetime, I developed the unfortunate habit

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How to Write Gud by me and George Orwell

  George Orwell, in his 1946 essay, Politics and the English Language, provided six simple rules for avoiding what he calls “bad English.” They are: Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to

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Edit, Schmedit

It looks like things are progressing out of sequence. However, I am a firm believer that if you allow events to happen organically, they occur when they need to. We often get frustrated because when we need to has little

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Keeping It Real

My characters are real to me. No, I’m not schizophrenic, to my knowledge. I can separate reality from fantasy, and do so, as it suits me. I mean, in my writing and editing, I go to great lengths to make

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If You Like It, Take It Out

I’ve heard the same mantra from a number of authors, that in editing, the surest way to identify and remove the crap is to seek out the words you thought brilliant. Some advocate taking out those parts you like the

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Pro(re)gress

Progress in the arts is an interesting thing. With most things, when you work to improve – practicing, learning, gaining, and acting on feedback – you progress, and it is a purely positive experience. Not so with the arts. There

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Editing Lover-Hater

I am a natural editor. By natural, I mean I spent 10 years of my life being paid to edit people’s words. If you spend enough time doing anything, you can become a natural at it. Of course, I’m being

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What Not to Write

I’m with Dizzy. Learning what not to write has been equally challenging. Now, I’ll be the first to admit, I argued with the “masters” on some of these at first. For instance, my precious adverbs. By now, most of us

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