when you left
i kept forgetting to breathe
and my heart would skip
dancing in the waves
until you disappeared from view
and now, my love,
i can no longer breathe
alone
when you left
i kept forgetting to breathe
and my heart would skip
dancing in the waves
until you disappeared from view
and now, my love,
i can no longer breathe
alone
Comments are closed.
Touching!!
Thank you. 🙂
This is very moving Bill!
Thank you, Bob. One of my true-life poems.
Now there lies a story!
You leave me breathless and speechless, for a whole different bunch of reasons at different times. But leaving you was tough, as is becoming the norm. Each time gets a little easier because I know I will be seeing you again, but the wait always seems eternal between our coming together.
Ze feeling is moochul. I love you.
I love you too my love.
simply magnifique… bravo and congrats! cheers, Mélanie
Mélanie, merci beaucoup.
Short and sweet like a tender touch. Lovely, Bill.
Thanks, Christina. 🙂
Beautiful poem Bill! Have a wonderful week ahead!
Thanks, Wendell. You do the same.
heart wrenchingly beautiful Bill!
Thank you so much. 🙂